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Here’s a bit of poetry that I came up with the other day. I just started playing with words and within the space of an hour I had two poems. I’m gonna save the other one for another post/time, but here’s the first one I wrote, entitled: One foot in the grave, one foot on your head

Would be interesting to know people’s opinions.

One foot in the grave, one foot on your head

Limericks so lucidly lie,

When it comes to black hearts and bomb battalions

One for the heroes and fallen.

An evil,

Not necessarily, but I say verily

We are the custodians of the wounded

Profits and policy.

Whitehall and wankers,

Bravado and Bullshit.

Yet we cry,

Another way surely?

Motivate yourself,

take a long hard look, because for this remedy there is no book.

Tell me why?

This dove,

A symbol of love so misplaced,

An empty symbol of flesh and feathers,

or is it the hope inside that weathers?

Humans are a complicated sort,

especially when it comes to cruelty for sport.

Sometimes when silence is about

All you want to do is scream and shout, but…

We do not realise we are the ointment,

because If we were made in the image of a deity

We are a serious disappointment!

POSTED 27.05.10 BY: Definition_1990 | Comments (6)

6 Responses to “First Post”

  1. On May 27th, 2010 at 9:34 pm Aaron Kennedy said:

    purdy good samwise! well done. ax

  2. On May 27th, 2010 at 10:04 pm peeceethomas said:

    very, very good. but who are you?

  3. On May 28th, 2010 at 2:27 am Samuel Rowland said:

    Pete, it was sam rowland who penned the poem before you.

  4. On May 28th, 2010 at 5:27 am artbizness said:

    Peecethomas: Meet the lovely Sam Rowland. Sam Rowland: Meet the lovely Pete Thomas. :-D

  5. On May 28th, 2010 at 11:09 am ianmobsby said:

    Is this what you call a moot love in?

  6. On May 28th, 2010 at 12:00 pm artbizness said:

    Nope, just good netiquette! :-)